Voted For: veyetal

veyetal... ya verse was full of personals, punches and wordplay. structure was great. opener and closer could of been better. punches were good... some were hot some were not... but the verse is definatly good enough.... easy win

Ikso... first of all...EVERY bar was stretched except ya last one... structure was horrible... everything could of been pre-wrote and used for anyone... didnt have any kind of personal to it... ya got some elivating to do... keep ya chin up though

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