Voted For: veyetal

vey:

came over from another bored, cause ik's verses placed them all to sleep
leave, cause the only 'flava' you'll be having here...is the taste of defeat
pretty decent
spring on this bitch, he'll be fall'in back quick, ik better be'leaves'
he's hands down the greatest because thats all his verses ever recieve
forced w-play in 1st line im sure u meant thumbs down in 2nd line
never achieve fame, like sitting in the stands, iks'so apart from the game
but i bet he can leave a crowd roaring..........the start of his name!
neh... could of bin a good punch if worded better
what a lame, '~EaSy~'? well you could give up now if thats what you prefer to do
nice rules, if only you were in a crew i could say they all referred to you
a blah punch ^ sorry
fuck this fool, wishin' he could ride this one out....not even if you prayed on pedals
this wannabe pulling away with the win?.....not even if it were made of metal
again a "blah" punch : /

1st punch was pretty nice/witty looked like a promising verse. a couple of other decent/ok punches after but it was slowly down hill for the rest of the verse.


ikso:
Rock ya head’ till your fukkin `dome shakes’, kuz after this you’ll `never be the same` like `two snowflakes’
Your` two week’ like poor `room mates’, Bitch hows the gore taste! I’ll make this slut bow down till the whole floor breaks!
blah ^
I `rip threw more veyens/vines’ then `tarzan’,Burn ya fist till your palms spand,kuz your punches `poorer’ than `boxers on far lands’
I `float threw streets’ while your jus `waitin ta make moves’ like `car jams’,im a `beast’ wit Lines while your like hermaphadites..Only `part Man’!
apart from some extremely forced wordplay this was a blah punch
Rip `V’s neck’ worse than being `careless wit white T’s’, keep ya `chin up’ when you fight me kuz I ‘take more jaws out’ than pochers and `shark sightings’.(jaws/movie)
If this battle was a `brand of condom’ I must be `Ruffyn the beating’, im `playin willows’ wit him the way I’ll `stump-in/stompin your weeping’*
blah
This chump is a weakling, my fist have ya `voice box’ doin more work than `def children when speaking’!
This like livin in the hood..your lifes toast!`walk all over your bars’ wit out `payin attention’ like `drunk men wit blind folds’
I out `shine most`, and this bitch isn’t near `the light’ like `dorfs reaching 4 light bulbs’, I fukkin knife skulls,and ` demand more bones’ than ‘burglars leavin heist notes’~!**
blah blah blah

seriously man you just drivlled on about nothing. multies don't win battles... punches do. also if you tried cutting your lines shorter the reader would be more interested in reading it. maybe this sorta stuff works for audio but in text it's totally different.

v/ veyetal