Voted For: Smoove

With a name like {Propain}.. it’s ironic that your wack w/ rhymes
While Smoove carries the Heat.. all Mourning.. like Alonzo in his prime
^^wasn't really a punchline
Just quit while your ahead kid..
..you know Smoove’s the best of the batch
For you to win this.. you’ll need a voting ring, chain n’ watch to match
^^a lil too basic bit ight
His parents doesn’t show him no love
Plus.. your career is coming up short.. ^like this line above
^^whack and just flat out stupuid
Your far from the best.. and that’s something you’ll never come near
Propain went into a crew thread.. to tryout..
^^this was a nice personal

Only shing moments of your verse was the last line.You need to work on werdplay and metas.Fix ya structure up.Ur shit was tough to read and ugly.If you win this,it' because of the last one.

I bring so much electricity, I shut Lights Down..
...Lets just say that Ill Milk-'Moo Like Cows..!
^^wat the hell u talkin about
..Put u on the Spot! Got swipes Insane Like Leopards..
...Just watch as I Jump-Moove like a Game Of Checkers..!
^^Mediocre.......
..I come through in silence with a Thumping Purpose..
...And thats to make Smoove nonexistant like a Bumpy Surface..!
^^suks.....not a punch
..Beat the fuck out this kid, Get Smacked And Punched..
...Feed you ya own bullets so you can literally Pack Ya Lunch..!
^^Shut up

Your whole verse spoke about you beatin him up.DISS HIM.It's okay to use one line about killin or beatin him...but you overdid it.Not to mention you had no personals or creativity.

Vote-Smoove(Vote in link below)

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851