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Old 06-20-05, 07:12 PM   #11
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Voted For: {Propain}



Smoove:

With a name like {Propain}.. it’s ironic that your wack w/ rhymes
While Smoove carries the Heat.. all Mourning.. like Alonzo in his prime
Decent Wordplay but Not A Direct Punch At Him..4/10
Just quit while your ahead kid..
..you know Smoove’s the best of the batch
For you to win this.. you’ll need a voting ring, chain n’ watch to match
Was Funny..but Not Hard Hitting..4/10
His parents doesn’t show him no love
Plus.. your career is coming up short.. ^like this line above
Ok..5/10
Your far from the best.. and that’s something you’ll never come near
Propain went into a crew thread.. to tryout..
..& they told him to:
Get the fuck outta here
Wasn't Feeling This..3/10

Overall: 16/40

Propain:

I bring so much electricity, I shut Lights Down..
...Lets just say that Ill Milk-'Moo Like Cows..!
Wasn't Feeling This Too Much..3/10
..Put u on the Spot! Got swipes Insane Like Leopards..
...Just watch as I Jump-Moove like a Game Of Checkers..!
Ok Name Play..5/10
..I come through in silence with a Thumping Purpose..
...And thats to make Smoove nonexistant like a Bumpy Surface..!
Decent Name Play..6/10
..Beat the fuck out this kid, Get Smacked And Punched..
...Feed you ya own bullets so you can literally Pack Ya Lunch.
Not Hard Hitting..4/10

Overall: 18/40

Vote - Propain For More Consistent Verse and Harder Hitting Punches.

~R~

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