intro not feeln it, 1st dude average flow, upp the lyrics and vocab doe. quialty isnt too good. I dont really like your voice, but dat could be cuz quailty distorts it idk..
do dubs and adlibs next time.
chorus is horrbile. a dude talking/mummbling.
dubs were off on his lol
damn dat hurts
2nd dude, not a fan of the voice or accent. quailty a lil better
sounds like he reading
flow needs work, delevery needs to be changed up a lil

not too bad for RV, up the quailty doe would make it better

5/10
chorus messed up any hope kinda..
no hate
holla atcha boi

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