aight fine i'll peep... i've heard this beat, who is it by? chorus is wack to me, lyrically, i hate these fifty cent lyrics... first dude up is aight, flow is a lil shaky sometimes, voice is coo, but lyrics is corny to me... gets in my car, n shows me her titties?? hmmm i dunno this is some fifty cent type shyt without tha gangster appeal, just a white suburbian boy collab takin a shot at a comercial track, i dunno thats my oppinion, i dont like how tha second verse is so short, i think you both have potential to be dope rappers, just drop tha 50 cent shit, rap about something legitamate...

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