k, i'm back. now, i liked the multi style, it was more complex than most people used, the strusture and flow were also on point, the concept was "ehh" but not bad, and you had some innovative phrase. However, the vocab could use improvement, especially when it's a subject like this, it was a little boring to read, and wordplay/metaphors were lacking or weak. Other than that, I would say that it's okay, keep spitting. I would give it a 7/10 overall.