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Old 06-22-05, 07:49 PM   #15
B. Magik
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Voted For: {Propain}

One Sided shit here

{Propain}:

Real nice drop here from you man...All of your punches hit and connected, which is a major plus...Sick wordplay, and nice personals here...Structure was fine, so your flow was on point throughout your drop...

"..I come through in silence with a Thumping Purpose..
...And thats to make Smoove nonexistant like a Bumpy Surface..!"

^^ Favorite Line

Smoove:

Ok man this was a decent drop here...Punches connected, but they weren't all that strong...You had a couple real nice lines in there however...Structure was a little iffy which kinda threw off the flow at times, but overall, it flowed decently...You need to work on creativity tho man, because some of your punches were on the right track, but weren't working out for you.

"..you know Smoove’s the best of the batch
For you to win this.. you’ll need a voting ring, chain n’ watch to match"

^^ Favorite Line

Decent verse, but I liked Propains verse better

V/ {Propain}

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