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I know I hate when they look but no comment. Having like 30 views and 2 comments is annoying, say something dammit, anything(related to the poem of course) LOL
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Originally Posted by H-N-I-C
Therefore creatin so to speak, a classic crafted piece, a master piece
That shows he's mastered THE prolific art of poetry
Therefore becoming one with his words...spawning a new being
So who is he u ask? He is poetry and poetry is me |
^^^let me start by saying, those few lines summed up the entire piece and stood out as spectacular. The rhymes and rhythm in this piece are great and each line grasp your attention. "THE prolific art of poetry"...that reminds me of this poem I did called "Poetry Is Prolfic". Anyway this was a tight piece. It reads more like something you should try and perform live, like at an open mic poetry reading. I'm sure it will get the whole room snapping. Have you ever performed live before?
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"It's the knowledge of the youth untold
Our roots ungrown, so when the truth unfolds
You will realize and know it's me
I told you my story through the eyes of poetry
I ran for the light, darkness soon banned from my life
And I'd be damned for the strife
but I'm as deep as my words...so I AM what I write" - Prolific
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