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06-22-05, 08:28 AM
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Poetry is me
IP: 0825 899A
Who is he u ask? He is poetry and poetry is me
He speaks in metaphor and simili's He creates rhyme scheme's so complex That they'll leave the average man's mind perplexed Everytime he grabs the mic to flex He manifests a multitude of meaningful masterpieces Placing words in their proper places like puzzle pieces He punches pitiful punchlines and walks on synonyms synonomous with poetry Who is he u ask? He is poetry and poetry is me He makes faces radiate with every rhythmic resonance of a rhyme He feeds and fills your faces asking that u do nothing but digest his lyrical content Do him a favor...embrace and enjoy the fruits of his labor Savor the experience that is He Who is he u ask? He is poetry and poetry is me He attacks the art of articulation with the utmost perseverence and patience Therefore creatin so to speak, a classic crafted piece, a master piece That shows he's mastered THE prolific art of poetry Therefore becoming one with his words...spawning a new being So who is he u ask? He is poetry and poetry is me FEATURED~Nice job.1 Last edited by fluidmoon : 06-29-05 at 12:30 PM. |
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06-22-05, 03:22 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
uppin.................
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06-23-05, 07:40 AM
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IP: 28AD 5545
I see u lookin.....so go ahead and leave feed
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06-23-05, 08:09 PM
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IP: 4500 6328
I know I hate when they look but no comment. Having like 30 views and 2 comments is annoying, say something dammit, anything(related to the poem of course) LOL
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^^^let me start by saying, those few lines summed up the entire piece and stood out as spectacular. The rhymes and rhythm in this piece are great and each line grasp your attention. "THE prolific art of poetry"...that reminds me of this poem I did called "Poetry Is Prolfic". Anyway this was a tight piece. It reads more like something you should try and perform live, like at an open mic poetry reading. I'm sure it will get the whole room snapping. Have you ever performed live before?
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"It's the knowledge of the youth untold Our roots ungrown, so when the truth unfolds You will realize and know it's me I told you my story through the eyes of poetry I ran for the light, darkness soon banned from my life And I'd be damned for the strife but I'm as deep as my words...so I AM what I write" - Prolific |
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06-24-05, 12:23 AM
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IP: 28AD 5545
I'm seeing great poems in here today and this was definately one of them,i like how you flip your words, good vocabulary as well, this would be a dope audio piece,reminds me of a positive affirmation that one would repeat to themselves, the way you present it, good emotion and rhyme scheme,keep dropping.1
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"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI" O Y D   *FluidMusic* *Poetic Scriptures Moderator* Last edited by fluidmoon : 06-24-05 at 12:42 AM. |
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06-24-05, 07:34 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
Preciate the feed guys...Well, just about all the poetry I post in here is in spoken word form, I just don't have the equipmnet to record......so, I just post so I can get some type of feedback
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06-29-05, 04:49 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
up up up and away.........
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