I'm seeing great poems in here today and this was definately one of them,i like how you flip your words, good vocabulary as well, this would be a dope audio piece,reminds me of a positive affirmation that one would repeat to themselves, the way you present it, good emotion and rhyme scheme,keep dropping.1

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