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Old 06-25-05, 02:32 PM   #13
~Lady Fiya~
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^if i'm correct Dacontinue is in your crew as well as me.. i have no beef, hotshh we fam, you just do this every battle you get in the K.L.L., it was your choice to drop 2 hours earlier...

but here's my breakdown..

~Hotshh...
You an Entry Level Textcee.......get $ 5. 15 to Start, Hoe
RV dont see that you exist, like the blind at Art Shows
Blind lines are played.. first half was decent 5.15 pay, aight.. 6/10
KLL Champ? Rv will start to take u serious........ After Laughs
Da only time u get 'Credit' for ya work, is when u Pass Ya Class
not good.. 0/10
And personally, i really dont need personals to Clown dis Dude
Cause this merking will even make "T.C. Look Down On You"
multis are nice, punch = not connected 3/10
Ill bend ya hands back, and rip off the thumbs they Attached Wit
And make u see the light faster than smokers bumming for Matches
one of your better bars.. 7/10
I'll end your fame... And Fux get put in a box like Nintendo Games
And leave your wins streakless like glass cleaner on Window Panes
lol not bad... 8/10
I Slice thru pussy to make the Best Meat....... U? I dont Stress Geek
And leave your face with more "checks" than a 'Grade A' Test Sheet
closer's ehhh 6/10

30/60 ~
Seems like you were more focused on multis than delivering hard punches.. I normally see you drop better than this.

~FuxJustaWord...
Must Prescribe Nyquil, ur verses get slept on like cows in the hay
Da Medicine Man? Yup............cuz Hot keeps the illness away
hot keep the illness away, best opener, nice punch & personal... 9/10
So Watsup Doc? It Bugs me how ur nuts are Bunny hopper wins
And with 6 TE's in the league, i guess its true that the Dr. is in
lol creative with the Bugs Bunny part.. DR part was nice wordplay, Dr. & D/R and Da Medicine Man (title).. nice connection.. 7/10
Just a quick key, its too easy, cuz i saw ur verse man, believe me
And I still bet we'll see Hot Sizzle, like I'm rhymin off the heazy
i wasn't feeling none of this.. 0/10
Didnt need me to keep u quiet(shh) so for this battle, keep it the same
Cuz How can he diss me???? He's prolly too scared to say my name
lol aight play on his name.. 6/10
No it aint Destiny, but I'll survive this battle and keep on defendin
Cuz if my verse is beneath yours, Id just be admittin i posted second
^another creative bar.. wish you threw a hard punch @ HIM tho.. 5/10
Ur flunkin this course, after this battle i bet you'll start to Hate F
So its time to teach you a lesson, but i'll stick with droppin H.S.
H.S.- Hot.Shh, nice punch to end, good word/nameplay... 7/10
34/60 ~
you had better personals and punches in your verse.. with the exception of the one bar..

Vote = FuxJustaWord
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