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Old 06-20-05, 02:35 AM   #1
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HW Title - FuxJustAWord vs. Hotshh!

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Minimum of 8 Lines
(Decide amount in your Check Ins)
Check Ins due Wednesday
Verses due Friday

All times are eastern.

Go read the KLL Rules if you are unsure about them..
 
Old 06-20-05, 10:37 AM   #2
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finally back......... for all my battles i just sed anywhere from 8-12 lines is cool.... if u want a specific amount between that, just say it and ill drop the same...

.....check
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Old 06-20-05, 08:19 PM   #3
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8 lines sounds good
check in
 
Old 06-21-05, 07:30 PM   #4
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on second thought
make it 12 playa
this is for the championship
 
Old 06-21-05, 07:58 PM   #5
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If you bitches go 8 on a champ match I will fly down to wherever you live and bitch smack you
 
Old 06-22-05, 08:40 AM   #6
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oooh ooh! make it a punchline battle!!!
 
Old 06-22-05, 11:10 AM   #7
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^i will........ 6 bars worth.... but stop postin until the verses are up
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Old 06-24-05, 08:35 PM   #8
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You an Entry Level Textcee.......get $ 5. 15 to Start, Hoe
RV dont see that you exist, like the blind at Art Shows
KLL Champ? Rv will start to take u serious........ After Laughs
Da only time u get 'Credit' for ya work, is when u Pass Ya Class
And personally, i really dont need personals to Clown dis Dude
Cause this merking will even make "T.C. Look Down On You"
Ill bend ya hands back, and rip off the thumbs they Attached Wit
And make u see the light faster than smokers bumming for Matches
I'll end your fame... And Fux get put in a box like Nintendo Games
And leave your wins streakless like glass cleaner on Window Panes
I Slice thru pussy to make the Best Meat....... U? I dont Stress Geek
And leave your face with more "checks" than a 'Grade A' Test Sheet
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Old 06-24-05, 11:34 PM   #9
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Must Prescribe Nyquil, ur verses get slept on like cows in the hay
Da Medicine Man? Yup............cuz Hot keeps the illness away
So Watsup Doc? It Bugs me how ur nuts are Bunny hopper wins
And with 6 TE's in the league, i guess its true that the Dr. is in
Just a quick key, its too easy, cuz i saw ur verse man, believe me
And I still bet we'll see Hot Sizzle, like I'm rhymin off the heazy
Didnt need me to keep u quiet(shh) so for this battle, keep it the same
Cuz How can he diss me???? He's prolly too scared to say my name
No it aint Destiny, but I'll survive this battle and keep on defendin
Cuz if my verse is beneath yours, Id just be admittin i posted second
Ur flunkin this course, after this battle i bet you'll start to Hate F
So its time to teach you a lesson, but i'll stick with droppin H.S.


If u dont get sumthin, just pm me, cuz i didnt feel like puttin in the " " and shit, just look at his initials, name and title.... and he's reppin TE
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Old 06-24-05, 11:39 PM   #10
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OH OH, and Dr = D/R
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Old 06-25-05, 01:09 PM   #11
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Quote:
Originally Posted by hotshh!
You an Entry Level Textcee.......get $ 5. 15 to Start, Hoe
RV dont see that you exist, like the blind at Art Shows
this was weak... kinda played concept
KLL Champ? Rv will start to take u serious........ After Laughs
Da only time u get 'Credit' for ya work, is when u Pass Ya Class
decent wordplay, not really that hard hittin tho
And personally, i really dont need personals to Clown dis Dude
Cause this merking will even make "T.C. Look Down On You"
good personal. probably your best line
Ill bend ya hands back, and rip off the thumbs they Attached Wit
And make u see the light faster than smokers bumming for Matches
this was alright... it coulda been worded better to have a better effect.
I'll end your fame... And Fux get put in a box like Nintendo Games
And leave your wins streakless like glass cleaner on Window Panes
on second thought, THIS was your best line... nice wordplay wit tha streakless part. it could have been worded better also but it was still good
I Slice thru pussy to make the Best Meat....... U? I dont Stress Geek
And leave your face with more "checks" than a 'Grade A' Test Sheet
this was barely decent because leaving checks on someones face really has no meaning but the wordplay was nice
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Must Prescribe Nyquil, ur verses get slept on like cows in the hay
Da Medicine Man? Yup............cuz Hot keeps the illness away
wow.. pretty dope intro... i like the play on his memeber title
So Watsup Doc? It Bugs me how ur nuts are Bunny hopper wins
And with 6 TE's in the league, i guess its true that the DR is in
hahaha... whats up doc? decent line... i like the DR wordplay at the end... *just so yall know, i changed the Dr. to DR in this bc he said dr=DR
Just a quick key, its too easy, cuz i saw ur verse man, believe me
And I still bet we'll see Hot Sizzle, like I'm rhymin off the heazy
This wasnt really a diss but it was pretty funny!! hahah
Didnt need me to keep u quiet(shh) so for this battle, keep it the same
Cuz How can he diss me???? He's prolly too scared to say my name
this concept was played but u made it decent, i've never seen that spin on his name before
No it aint Destiny, but I'll survive this battle and keep on defendin
Cuz if my verse is beneath yours, Id just be admittin i posted second
nothin special here
Ur flunkin this course, after this battle i bet you'll start to Hate F
So its time to teach you a lesson, but i'll stick with droppin H.S.
this was the dopest play on HotShhh! i have ever seen. definately your best line and the best line in the battle.
this line could have won the battle alone!!!!!


this vote easily goes to fux. he definately came harder. hot had some played concepts, along wit some good ones
but the played outweighed the good making his verse kinda weak. hots punches were alright but it was nothin i havent
seen before. his best line was the streakless wins line because it was really original and funny. no real personals
he had some straight multies at the end but other than that this verse was definately not his best...

fux had a really hard hittin verse. almost every line was dope. most of the punches were hard hittin and
his personals were great. his opener and closer were illy. GL both of you...
no hate hot... i've seen u come much better tho
V/ Fux
 
Old 06-25-05, 01:33 PM   #12
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nice verse
but then again i dropped at 8:30
u were online viewing my verse for like 2 hours
so good job re writing ya verse against mine
ohhh, thanx for the vote against me in PL
im sure it was fair
 
Old 06-25-05, 02:32 PM   #13
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^if i'm correct Dacontinue is in your crew as well as me.. i have no beef, hotshh we fam, you just do this every battle you get in the K.L.L., it was your choice to drop 2 hours earlier...

but here's my breakdown..

~Hotshh...
You an Entry Level Textcee.......get $ 5. 15 to Start, Hoe
RV dont see that you exist, like the blind at Art Shows
Blind lines are played.. first half was decent 5.15 pay, aight.. 6/10
KLL Champ? Rv will start to take u serious........ After Laughs
Da only time u get 'Credit' for ya work, is when u Pass Ya Class
not good.. 0/10
And personally, i really dont need personals to Clown dis Dude
Cause this merking will even make "T.C. Look Down On You"
multis are nice, punch = not connected 3/10
Ill bend ya hands back, and rip off the thumbs they Attached Wit
And make u see the light faster than smokers bumming for Matches
one of your better bars.. 7/10
I'll end your fame... And Fux get put in a box like Nintendo Games
And leave your wins streakless like glass cleaner on Window Panes
lol not bad... 8/10
I Slice thru pussy to make the Best Meat....... U? I dont Stress Geek
And leave your face with more "checks" than a 'Grade A' Test Sheet
closer's ehhh 6/10

30/60 ~
Seems like you were more focused on multis than delivering hard punches.. I normally see you drop better than this.

~FuxJustaWord...
Must Prescribe Nyquil, ur verses get slept on like cows in the hay
Da Medicine Man? Yup............cuz Hot keeps the illness away
hot keep the illness away, best opener, nice punch & personal... 9/10
So Watsup Doc? It Bugs me how ur nuts are Bunny hopper wins
And with 6 TE's in the league, i guess its true that the Dr. is in
lol creative with the Bugs Bunny part.. DR part was nice wordplay, Dr. & D/R and Da Medicine Man (title).. nice connection.. 7/10
Just a quick key, its too easy, cuz i saw ur verse man, believe me
And I still bet we'll see Hot Sizzle, like I'm rhymin off the heazy
i wasn't feeling none of this.. 0/10
Didnt need me to keep u quiet(shh) so for this battle, keep it the same
Cuz How can he diss me???? He's prolly too scared to say my name
lol aight play on his name.. 6/10
No it aint Destiny, but I'll survive this battle and keep on defendin
Cuz if my verse is beneath yours, Id just be admittin i posted second
^another creative bar.. wish you threw a hard punch @ HIM tho.. 5/10
Ur flunkin this course, after this battle i bet you'll start to Hate F
So its time to teach you a lesson, but i'll stick with droppin H.S.
H.S.- Hot.Shh, nice punch to end, good word/nameplay... 7/10
34/60 ~
you had better personals and punches in your verse.. with the exception of the one bar..

Vote = FuxJustaWord
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Old 06-25-05, 03:21 PM   #14
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Ur flunkin this course, after this battle i bet you'll start to Hate F
So its time to teach you a lesson, but i'll stick with droppin H.S.
No it aint Destiny, but I'll survive this battle and keep on defendin
Cuz if my verse is beneath yours, Id just be admittin i posted second

vs.

really nothin of hotshh

fux came harder....

v/fux
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Old 06-25-05, 05:32 PM   #15
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why does Lady fiya have one of the williams sisters in her sig?....looks like vserena....i think, not sure which is the one with black hair....i hate tennis anyway


but Fix got this, much better wordplay in the verse, no played concepts an the playin off hotshh was fuckin ILL.
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