ok let me put it blunt for you yeah.

i get the joke.... but it wasnt funny

funny is something like

whats the difference between michael jackson and ackney?? atleast acknet waits untill your 15 before it cums all over ya face

but this was poorly written, your flow speeded up at times like u was rushing to fit it in the bar, therefore the flow is sloppy, your lyrics were extremely basic

take the advice and crit n stop making excuses, id murk u in a battle easy nuff said