this was alright in my opinion, i wasnt feeling either of your approached to the subject..

solja, this seemed like a more poetic drop. imagery was there but it was more abstract and harder to grasp. your flow was off in parts as it was more poetic but thats ok. emotion was solid along with your vocab. your first bar really stood out to me, but the rest kinda fell off

wall, i was feeling yours more. it was hitting the subject from a topical approach with nice structure. imagery was there i could imagine it happening in my mind. emotion was good, made me keep reading... solid drop

i thought more metas and a twist here or there could have improved this piece, but overall it was a pretty good drop.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196942
out of the ord for me, mostly hit topicals...just wanted to test myself..pz

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