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Old 06-28-05, 11:35 AM   #8
Dervla
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I loved your structure...The style you used was good. The vocab was excellent. The emotion was the best aspect in your piece. the imagination was good too. Nice using your words. You painted a portrait. The meta'z was at it's best in this piece. Keep it up

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