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Old 06-28-05, 01:00 PM   #8
Acuity
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hmmm/... beat is not sick lol , heard it enough times bre but lets c how u rock it

hook is aight, another layer woulda been nice to polish it like sum adlibs or sumin, ur flow isnt right in the hook sounds rushed "on sum word sum word call u a coward", clarity is good on hook , but dips on verse, ur flow is cool, is forced at times and can here u slightly pausin or slightly speedin up to meet the snare,lyrics are on a basic level, but they work i suppose

overall an aight track, best full song ive heard from you, room for improvement tho, but decent nonetheless

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197064
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