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06-27-05, 11:25 AM
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Life of a Legend
IP: 0DD2 7DAA
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ye, felt motivated so i written a song enjoy and leave some feed plzz i replied to omens diss track to me and leady-dubstate entry... links to follow pz http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196892 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196640 |
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06-27-05, 01:35 PM
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IP: 56DF 700A
i like the hook and the beat goes perfect wit da words...and some of the shit u said was deep...u kinda remind me of eminem..this sounds like somethin he would say...
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06-27-05, 02:46 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: B55B EDCA
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Beat: yeah its cool...heard it to much Flow: yeah pretty dope Quality: perfect perfect Lyrics: super dope...best ive heard from you yo we need to collab again once man...holla at me. |
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06-27-05, 03:20 PM
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Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
word get at me wit a beat on msn man.... uppin for more feed
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06-28-05, 05:49 AM
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Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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06-28-05, 07:02 AM
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Addicted
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IP: 6C62 E515
beats sick
emotion on hook is nice hook is nice flow is pretty good better than ur previous emotion cud be abit stronger lyrics are cool, carry a message so dnt needa be complex quite like this keep it up |
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06-28-05, 07:14 AM
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Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
thnx for the feed man
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06-28-05, 01:00 PM
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: 9636 6B69
hmmm/... beat is not sick lol , heard it enough times bre but lets c how u rock it
hook is aight, another layer woulda been nice to polish it like sum adlibs or sumin, ur flow isnt right in the hook sounds rushed "on sum word sum word call u a coward", clarity is good on hook , but dips on verse, ur flow is cool, is forced at times and can here u slightly pausin or slightly speedin up to meet the snare,lyrics are on a basic level, but they work i suppose overall an aight track, best full song ive heard from you, room for improvement tho, but decent nonetheless  http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197064
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06-28-05, 04:44 PM
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Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
thnx for the feed..........
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06-28-05, 07:03 PM
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IP: 7AAD A2C1
lol damn i did a song to this beat a while back...its gettin played...its a dope beat...but damn...
ok your hook is decent... never had a thing for the accents..they get on my nerves to be honest...dont know why... lyrically this was good...i was feelin it as far as the lyrics go.... flow was ok... quality can be upped...i cant understand some of what your sayin in a couple parts...but that may be because of your accent...who knows....quality can stand to be upped though overall this was an ok track...good lyrically...but like i said...for som reason...i dont like the accent...sorry lol..... please return favor on "Dont Say ft. Black Magik"...thanks
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06-29-05, 04:43 AM
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Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
lol thnx for the feed
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06-29-05, 03:49 PM
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OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
beat is nice
ur flow is on beat, but sometimes choppy decent track dawg 1 |
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06-29-05, 05:00 PM
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Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
thnx yo i appriaciate the feedback
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