Voted For: -BrokenInsanity-
I'mma come in with insane words and suicidal tendencies
This guy only 'knows whats best' because he tried to befriend me
^^nah...1st line was filler....3/10
I'll leave you dazed as I rome, counting votes like electing new popes
This guys a mere joke, a nerd asking a woman out, I left him with no hopes
^^didn't flow good,too basic...3/10
He's going out, taking shots to the cranuium like a cocaine gram
Its like this guys got no 'torso' cuz he aint 'half the man' I am
^^ight......6/10
Stand back as I grill this pussy like felines on a routissuire (sp.?)
Taking me down to your level is the only why your dissing me
^^^too basic....3/10
Wait it aint over, I'll leave this guy fucked up like bar bashes
Cuz his 'car-rear' is more wrecked than those in nascar crashes
^^Nice word fission....6/10
2 nice punches.The rest were too basic.Had some filler in there.Flow was off at some points and structure was ight.Just work on makin ur punches hit.And add some personals in ur shit next time.
Convinced diets are bad, an eatin fat is nothin but good for yah health.
You'd even try "suckin ya own dick", an end up gettin a*head* of yaself..
^^^head lines are played and 1st line was whack,4/10
You ain't got an ounce of respect, broken is nice? RV's doubtful yes.
An its easy to forget B like stoppin at A & sayin fuck the rest of the alphabet..
^^^ight...6/10
Yer flow is awful, an could truely Dizturb ppl every time.
Hittin on time, i heard 7's yah fav number?...Why? Cause 7-"Ate"-9..
^^what the hell......that is bullshit and played,0/10
Leavin yah speechless worse than a mute with no hands, this an easy win.
I'd offer to re-make you a sig, but just like your life, you'd never "fit in"..
^^too basic.....2/10
Forever a fuckin misfit, but in this story only happy endings are allowed.
So i sent ya 2 the obesity ward... now u finally "blend in with the crowd"..
^^OK.....5/10
U had some really stupuid wrodplay in there.Like that 7 ate 9 bullshit.That is just as cheesy as it gets.But luckily...you flowed better than BrokenInsanity.U had some decent punches in there.And you actually had a personal unlike the other guy.
Vote-Unfuckwidable
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-strobe