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Old 07-04-05, 01:21 PM   #15
TeamOne
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From: Chitown
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TephlonI'm all up IN-Destructable emcees causin erosion an fixin you're Name
'Cause ya 'Limited Edition' flows .......are just livin a 'Dream' Like GAME
blah opener.....weak wordplay 5
You pre-approved Lame... with 'mic checks' but wheres the Cash?????
I aint even gotta throw a punch, cuz when you swing..
........................................Ya get knocked out from the Backlash.
alil weak setup and stretched second line, but made for a funny punch 6.5
rhymes like whiplash, get ya spine broke an you'll wanna Sue-me
but on the court, you dropped the ball....
.................................................. ..quicker than hittin puberty!
hah, this was ok 6.5
ya played style aint nothin new-to-me, you just catchin a whoopin
your like an obese street fighter..always bitin...never pun or Hookin
stupid last bar in my opinion 4

22/40


LI
ill smash your herb crew, even you can get hit
kid, im hitting R.A.W so much
..........................ur mom will get pregnant
decent wordplay.. but this mommajoke shithas been played since forever 5
dickriding my ass. i dont need it so fuck that suck-up shit
i got a bullet proof cock the way Tephlons all over my dick
decent wordplay but im not feelin the punch about it at all 5.5
get out of my way. you bout to get passed
and thats a wrap....cuz saran all over ya ass*
good wordplay again, this one connected alil bit 6/10
this kids connected to herb lines, aim for dope, wont hit one
you cant plug into tight bars thats wire gonna lose this one**
i liked this line best of ur whole verse... best word play in my opinion also 7

23.5/40


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