Voted For: Stanza
this was a igght battle here......
ripping this bitch, burning through ya head like im lighting a comb
crackin ya dome, cause im splittin stanza faster than writing a poem
still think ya deserve props....but anything to do with you, we dont care
only the dead know the end?....thats why your skill is going no where
vs.
Having A "Net In his Mouth" Was the Only time this dude ever "Catch a Beat"
This Guys Runnin from This Battle Cant you See The "Blisssters On His Feet"
This Dude Games Rusty So Ima Smooth Him Out Like My Style Was "Lotion"
Cryin Cuz You lostThis Battle Was The only Time You had "Vivid Emotions"
This Dude Has "No Game" Like "G-Unit" But Watch Me Give Him What Due
Bcuz Im Living Up To Your Aspectations When I Say That "This is for You"
stanza had better punches and they were better concepts and more thought of, thats y i'm giving this to him.... bliss work on your structure and syllable count
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