Voted For: bdotones

Black City

its time for the teenager from Detroit to rip tha ADULT from Brooklyn
a twenty three year old homo, AY Q DIS GUY IS GAY ASS LOOKIN!!
4/10...gay lines about tha q= played
you say you a teacher, wow, for what subject do you teach?
is it sexual education? and all the kiddy pants you reach
3/10...wack, badly worded also
how stupid do you have to be to call out somebody like me?
i shouldnt have to drop against a nigga wit tha crew like 3-I-V-E
5/10...it was alright
what do dat stand for? three ignorant virgan erections?
fuckin gay, stop stalkin all of my battles nigga, dats a no-no
2/10...and ur lucky to get 1....stupid and doesnt rhyme
and what tha fuck is a B Dot Ones? hold up, let me guess
BDotOnes tha type of football buff dat take jock jizz on tha chest
3/10...horrible
nigga you trash so take ya bullshit verse and throw it out
cuz everybody on tha board dont believe what comes out ya mouth
7/10...basic but your best bar

24/60....40%

p.s...........if all of them were "simple"..why the hell did u find it necessary to have explanations at the end?


bdotones

If you was a "transvestike", who "switched sexes" cuz of a "mid"-life crisis, you wouldn't be "half a man"/
you "act gangsta", but "wouldn't hold heat", standing in the "desert wit Al Quada in Pakastan"//
4/10...good wordplay..but stretched
you rap like "donkeys walking in reverse", "a$$ backwards"/
you the "son of a dead obese man wit dominant genes, you fat bastard"//
5/10...haha..decent
Black City, more like Gray Town, you a "bootleg comedian", a "fake clown"/
you wouldn't get a "first", "playing football", wit "8 downs"//
7/10...nice wordplay
your "fingers" can't type heat, homie, I got "phive" on it/
your rhymes like conversations about failed rappers, your lines boring//
3/10...wasnt really feelin it
"B.C", couldn't rep a "black city", in egypt, 5,000 years "before christ"/
its alright, ya "flow broke", you can't spit "quality", you can't "affoard mikes"
6/10...pretty good

25/50......50%

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