Voted For: Black City

its time for the teenager from Detroit to rip tha ADULT from Brooklyn
a twenty three year old homo, AY Q DIS GUY IS GAY ASS LOOKIN!!*
um....ok
you say you a teacher, wow, for what subject do you teach?
is it sexual education? and all the kiddy pants you reach**
haha...damn
how stupid do you have to be to call out somebody like me?
i shouldnt have to drop against a nigga wit tha crew like 3-I-V-E***
not a very good personal but nice attempt
what do dat stand for? three ignorant virgan erections?
fuckin gay, stop stalkin all of my battles nigga, dats a no-no****
where was the rhyme here???
and what tha fuck is a B Dot Ones? hold up, let me guess
BDotOnes tha type of football buff dat take jock jizz on tha chest*****
damn...haha
nigga you trash so take ya bullshit verse and throw it out
cuz everybody on tha board dont believe what comes out ya mouth
um...not a very good finisher




Breakdown- This verse was mediocre...kinda of nice....some lines were like WOW and then you started to to fall off then you would come back wit somethin nice...but this verse was nice RATED-6/10






If you was a "transvestike", who "switched sexes" cuz of a "mid"-life crisis, you wouldn't be "half a man"/
you "act gangsta", but "wouldn't hold heat", standing in the "desert wit Al Quada in Pakastan"//
complexity unbelievable and a real nice punch...
you rap like "donkeys walking in reverse", "a$$ backwards"/
you the "son of a dead obese man wit dominant genes, you fat bastard"//
ok
Black City, more like Gray Town, you a "bootleg comedian", a "fake clown"/
you wouldn't get a "first", "playing football", wit "8 downs"//
ok...not really hittin
your "fingers" can't type heat, homie, I got "phive" on it/
your rhymes like conversations about failed rappers, your lines boring//
um...no no
"B.C", couldn't rep a "black city", in egypt, 5,000 years "before christ"/
its alright, ya "flow broke", you can't spit "quality", you can't "affoard mikes"
haha


Breakdown- This verse was ok...it feel off in the middle but still had me wantin more from the first bar...it was really hard to rate your verse cuz you would surprise me with a real nice line then you would rhyme like Dr. Seuss....RATED-7/10


VOTE-BD (only because it seemed like he put forth a lil more thought into his rhyme.......REALLY CLOSE)

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