OMG, becky......yur so deep.....lol
this was dope....vocab killen mine....yu know im hooked on phonix....lol
sick imagery, which is something i love(shh dont tell nobody)...flow was good....
Quote:
Wandering around for million days in this obscure, vague maze
Such cruel part fate plays, leading me through a lost life phase
Despite the dim dark I still embarked on sole treacherous travel
No sign of a single spark, seeking my way over unstable gravel
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^yeeeeaaaaaaahhhhhh....(thats all i need to say)
damn, ma....you should get paid for this.....yu ever posted at poetry dot com?....im sure people wud love what yu write...im kinda jealous....lol....keep hold to ya pen