shit man you elevated a lot, flow is better quality is gettin` a bit better, emotion is very good nice lyrics the thing that i'd liek to see mroe is a better rhyme scheme when you do rhyme your stucture is good and everything imagery is very good, i can feel the stessin you been goin though wit this gurl, but keep workin man try to do somin more then just love songs though alright, try n use your lyrics for salvation. alright 1

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