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Old 07-06-05, 08:45 PM   #3
Triple_N
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yea son ya flow is def better in this son....I like the sample on the beat....ya delivery isn't bad....it isn't as smoothe as it could be but its still good....the lyrics are simple but good..u telling a good story but a rhyme scheme switch woulda been nice here an there....quality is a lil muffled but not bad neither...that sample is crazy loud at the end....but beat is nice...overall its a good song that could use some polishing but can also hold it down as is....good shit.....7/10...stay up.........1
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