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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP:
Voted For: Denied Truth
Both yall took the topic the same way..I woulda liked to have sene someone spit this origianl but neither did but anways
Story development: Denied
Vocab: denied
Flow: denied
Structure: denied
Creativity: Neither...tie
Metas: Neither...tie
Overall both yall had poorly developed stories but denied's jus was put together better....propain stopped every 4 lines to tell us the sceen had changed<--thats wack...write ya story so people will know the scene changed instead of u having to dictate it to them.
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice
Because at the end of the day, you get what you give
So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is
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