Voted For: LL Cool K

Ya took ‘OneStepBeyond’ huh, but Max ya still set to sink..
Cuz the only time ya write a good verse is when ya ‘spilled’ ya ‘inc’..
^^OK...........
Ya can’t produce originality, kid ya ‘drowned’ in the ‘main-stream’..
‘More than meets the eye’……yea, he’s worse than he may seem..
^^1st line good....2nd wasn't
Bury ya amongst one of the greats, so at least ya came close to rich..
So right next to ‘Ol Dirty Bastard’……here lies ‘O.l S.tupid B.itch’..
^^^NO.......
Abracadabra!! This kid’s magic the way he pulls wins outta hats..
I mean he sportin a 3-0 record, yet I’m the only one in his battle stats..
^^OK...........
Dude eats bitches for breakfast…hey, I’ll cook ya one up for later..
Cuz that’s his job and he likes it, so Maximus will be ‘glad-he-ate-her’..*
^^This isn't a punch...so wat if he likes to eat bitches...or is he gay?
Reppin ya ‘Spilled Inc’ so I see ya changed ya crew name ‘n’ stuff..
Cuz I thought ya was ‘Optimistically Genius’……………………
…………………………..guess ya weren’t optimistic enough
^^OK....

U had a bunch of OK punches.Nothing spectactular.That punch about glad-he-ate-her.Is one step beyond openly gay...if he is....post some proof.Cause if he's not gay...then it not a punch and it makes him look good.But ya had loads of personals so good job.


Last time we battled, You just 'sat, earned' a win, shameless,
But now your wackness, you plan it/planet, Son/sun, your anus/uranus,*
^^urauns wordplay is played.....and why bring up that he beat you already?
Ain't gotta be inferior for me to say its 'over-king,' punches well recieved,**
Claims hes a vet and 'nose' the ring.... Well I hope he can 'smell' defeat,
^^^that played out wordplay again
I don't need help, its a 'solo' task beating you so your looking in a mirror,
Make someone 'say-damn'? Its cause they're slitting their 'wrist' in 'terror,'***
^^good......
LL Cool K is so wild???? This fools gay and his profile is just wasting info,
Your level of skill is 'so-lo' below my 'bars' it seems King is playing 'Limbo,'
^^^^Nice........
Solo a King? Ya need to 'check mate' cause you knowing your raps wack,
On this 'board' 'king' can take 'OneStep' but I'm always a little past that
^^slef glorifing eh?

Nice verse here.Only problem was you wordplay was played.Uranus and nose/knows lines are played out.Both of you actually have the same structure &rhyme scheme too.You had some good punches...but ya wasn't consistant.Get some fresh wordplay.

Vote-LL Cool K(Lmao......Take that K out son!!!!)
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