Battle Rules:

8-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No Dickriding
No Bullshit

3-0 = KO

G'Luck........

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 07-10-05 at 03:12 PM

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Win by 3-0 KO
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LL Cool K has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-10-05 02:43 PM.

Maximus has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-10-05 02:43 PM.

Ya took ‘OneStepBeyond’ huh, but Max ya still set to sink..
Cuz the only time ya write a good verse is when ya ‘spilled’ ya ‘inc’..
Ya can’t produce originality, kid ya ‘drowned’ in the ‘main-stream’..
‘More than meets the eye’……yea, he’s worse than he may seem..
Bury ya amongst one of the greats, so at least ya came close to rich..
So right next to ‘Ol Dirty Bastard’……here lies ‘O.l S.tupid B.itch’..
Abracadabra!! This kid’s magic the way he pulls wins outta hats..
I mean he sportin a 3-0 record, yet I’m the only one in his battle stats..
Dude eats bitches for breakfast…hey, I’ll cook ya one up for later..
Cuz that’s his job and he likes it, so Maximus will be ‘glad-he-ate-her’..*
Reppin ya ‘Spilled Inc’ so I see ya changed ya crew name ‘n’ stuff..
Cuz I thought ya was ‘Optimistically Genius’……………………
…………………………..guess ya weren’t optimistic enough..


* glad-he-ate-her / gladiator (as in the film…gladiator was called Maximus)

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Man, I lost again.... .........................

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shud be close...........................uppin bitchez..........

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Voted For: LL Cool K

Damn.. I'm cool with both of you..

This'll be honest shit yo..

The numbers I use are on a scale of 10..

Maximus

Last time we battled, You just 'sat, earned' a win, shameless,
But now your wackness, you plan it/planet, Son/sun, your anus/uranus,
This was forced.. seen it before too.. 2
Ain't gotta be inferior for me to say its 'over-king,' punches well recieved,
Claims hes a vet and 'nose' the ring.... Well I hope he can 'smell' defeat,
Nose/knows lines are played.. you didn't flip it at all.. 2
I don't need help, its a 'solo' task beating you so your looking in a mirror,
Make someone 'say-damn'? Its cause they're slitting their 'wrist' in 'terror,'
The concept had potential, but this was forced.. 4
LL Cool K is so wild???? This fools gay and his profile is just wasting info,
Your level of skill is 'so-lo' below my 'bars' it seems King is playing 'Limbo,'
Ehh.. Decent name flip.. 6
Solo a King? Ya need to 'check mate' cause you knowing your raps wack,
On this 'board' 'king' can take 'OneStep' but I'm always a little past that..
Self glorifying = not good. The concept would have been good in an OM type of thing, but in a battle self glorifying isn't good.. 3

Total - 17/100

LL Cool K

Ya took ‘OneStepBeyond’ huh, but Max ya still set to sink..
Cuz the only time ya write a good verse is when ya ‘spilled’ ya ‘inc’..
Didn't connect that hard.. 3
Ya can’t produce originality, kid ya ‘drowned’ in the ‘main-stream’..
‘More than meets the eye’……yea, he’s worse than he may seem..
Lol. This was pretty good. Could have been worded better though.. 7
Bury ya amongst one of the greats, so at least ya came close to rich..
So right next to ‘Ol Dirty Bastard’……here lies ‘O.l S.tupid B.itch’..
Nah.. 2
Abracadabra!! This kid’s magic the way he pulls wins outta hats..
I mean he sportin a 3-0 record, yet I’m the only one in his battle stats..
The concept had potential, but you worded it into a statement and not a punch.. 4
Dude eats bitches for breakfast…hey, I’ll cook ya one up for later..
Cuz that’s his job and he likes it, so Maximus will be ‘glad-he-ate-her’..
Forced.. Concept had potential though.. 5
Reppin ya ‘Spilled Inc’ so I see ya changed ya crew name ‘n’ stuff..
Cuz I thought ya was ‘Optimistically Genius’……………………
…………………………..guess ya weren’t optimistic enough..
Ehh.. You could have worded it better, but the concept was still decently good.. 6

Total - 27/120

Vote - LL Cool K

He had the better overall verse.

Nice honest vote. Hope all of them are explained...

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Voted For: LL Cool K

nice battle good from both of u both had personals and punches vocab was aight and structure and flow was good kinda a tie between both of yall but im goin wit LLCK cuz he came a lil harder wit personals and the punches and that just got me mad good line wit osb ol stupid bitch amde me laugh keep it up u both did good but my v/ goes to LL Cool K.......

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dunno whether or not that vote will stay...............but oh well, uppin..........

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UPN................like uppin fuckaz........

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Voted For: LL Cool K

Ya took ‘OneStepBeyond’ huh, but Max ya still set to sink..
Cuz the only time ya write a good verse is when ya ‘spilled’ ya ‘inc’..
^^OK...........
Ya can’t produce originality, kid ya ‘drowned’ in the ‘main-stream’..
‘More than meets the eye’……yea, he’s worse than he may seem..
^^1st line good....2nd wasn't
Bury ya amongst one of the greats, so at least ya came close to rich..
So right next to ‘Ol Dirty Bastard’……here lies ‘O.l S.tupid B.itch’..
^^^NO.......
Abracadabra!! This kid’s magic the way he pulls wins outta hats..
I mean he sportin a 3-0 record, yet I’m the only one in his battle stats..
^^OK...........
Dude eats bitches for breakfast…hey, I’ll cook ya one up for later..
Cuz that’s his job and he likes it, so Maximus will be ‘glad-he-ate-her’..*
^^This isn't a punch...so wat if he likes to eat bitches...or is he gay?
Reppin ya ‘Spilled Inc’ so I see ya changed ya crew name ‘n’ stuff..
Cuz I thought ya was ‘Optimistically Genius’……………………
…………………………..guess ya weren’t optimistic enough
^^OK....

U had a bunch of OK punches.Nothing spectactular.That punch about glad-he-ate-her.Is one step beyond openly gay...if he is....post some proof.Cause if he's not gay...then it not a punch and it makes him look good.But ya had loads of personals so good job.


Last time we battled, You just 'sat, earned' a win, shameless,
But now your wackness, you plan it/planet, Son/sun, your anus/uranus,*
^^urauns wordplay is played.....and why bring up that he beat you already?
Ain't gotta be inferior for me to say its 'over-king,' punches well recieved,**
Claims hes a vet and 'nose' the ring.... Well I hope he can 'smell' defeat,
^^^that played out wordplay again
I don't need help, its a 'solo' task beating you so your looking in a mirror,
Make someone 'say-damn'? Its cause they're slitting their 'wrist' in 'terror,'***
^^good......
LL Cool K is so wild???? This fools gay and his profile is just wasting info,
Your level of skill is 'so-lo' below my 'bars' it seems King is playing 'Limbo,'
^^^^Nice........
Solo a King? Ya need to 'check mate' cause you knowing your raps wack,
On this 'board' 'king' can take 'OneStep' but I'm always a little past that
^^slef glorifing eh?

Nice verse here.Only problem was you wordplay was played.Uranus and nose/knows lines are played out.Both of you actually have the same structure &rhyme scheme too.You had some good punches...but ya wasn't consistant.Get some fresh wordplay.

Vote-LL Cool K(Lmao......Take that K out son!!!!)
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Voted For: LL Cool K

vote-LL Cool K

K.Solo:
your verse was dope all around in my oponion...ya structure was great and had a nice flow to it...it was never choppy...vocab was in good hands I see so that was good...Punches hit hard and wwere creative...Opener was alright coulda used better wording...closer was dope though...

OSB:
your verse was ok ...structure was aight...some of the lines were stretched...flow was good and then got crappy....punches were ok but you had only a few...Vocab was used good...Opener was good and closer was alright coulda been worded better...

Solos best lines:
Bury ya amongst one of the greats, so at least ya came close to rich..
So right next to ‘Ol Dirty Bastard’……here lies ‘O.l S.tupid B.itch’..
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Reppin ya ‘Spilled Inc’ so I see ya changed ya crew name ‘n’ stuff..
Cuz I thought ya was ‘Optimistically Genius’……………………
…………………………..guess ya weren’t optimistic enough..

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OSB bestlines:
Ain't gotta be inferior for me to say its 'over-king,' punches well recieved,
Claims hes a vet and 'nose' the ring.... Well I hope he can 'smell' defeat


overall-this was a good battle but King Solo aka LL COOL K get my vote...good job both...

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