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Bangs like bikini attol
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Voted For: DoContinue
Yeah DoContinue won in every aspect of this..EC, you sorta got the right idea, but on a real n00bish level.. Remember with text to always set it up in sets of two lines which have the same rhyme at the end, and possably more rhymes in the middle. But dont just tell him your verse is hot, you need to be using proper diss concepts and making sure that your fucking with this guys emotions.. Also dont ever use the // at the end of lines, thats played out like whoa years ago. Just keep it real straight up punches.
Do continue, you know what ya doing.. Should try and come harder on the punches but you didnt really need it here. Easy vote. Peace.
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