propain....decent flow to your piece, a nice topic that you got creative with and approached it nice and brought a real good delivery. the vocabs were there but not 100% consistent, cud be a little better in that area, imagery was nice, a lot of feeling in your piece which i like rather than these 2-dimensional pieces some ppl drop

pen 'n' paper....a lot better from you, the best i've seen you do, a good approach and good delivery, flow was on point and you stayed on topic from start to finish, like propain you had some nice imagery and feeling but i feel you were a little too basic with your vocabs, try more complex shit in your drops and you will win a lot

V/ - Propain

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