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Yur So Kewl..This Was Very Well Written..Yur Opening Statement Was Good..Cuz I've Never Really Thought About Sight and Sound Matching...I Loved The Way Yu Described Sign Language...Yu Are Very Good With Imagery...
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but we fall into complex traps, willing to convert back to her we attempting to fly
we pivot back to what’s known, being ignorant we go on and on like clocks time
our hands switch position like gestures, for one to understand we’ll exaggerate it
Every word is in the eye of the beholder, writing insults her…Ms. Sign Language
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loved this part of it...last line was sick...and Realli put the icing on the cake in this piece.....
I've really onli seen in good detail Yur battling skillls....So its nyce to see that u can write too,.....This was a good Piece....Some Of The Better In Depth I've Read In Here
Keep Ya Pen Going
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..:: Artik In The Phlesh::..
.Re-Writing The Re-Run.
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