the beat is very nice... n laid back..

your flow is very nice on hear.. the lyrics is nice.. and the delivery is good.. but i could you could do way better.. but yeah.. everything is good.. but for the chorus.. i aint sure if u even put the chorus? did U? lol.. cuz its hard to tell... so if u did make that stand out more lol.. but yo try to change ur rhyme scheme every now and than cuz it all sounds the same man.. n makes it less-interesting.. overall higher than average.. n good since quality is good unlike me..

ovearall: 7/10

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198510

rtf plz

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