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Old 07-21-05, 03:35 PM   #4
Axel.
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Congrats to both of yall, I was really feelin this.

Boner: You had a tight verse, imagiry was on point, wordplay was sounded nice not great but not bad at all, the structure hm...was kinda stretched work on not stretching your lines and youll be fine, rhyme shceme was fine so i could flow to it..

Good Job !..

Parinoid.: I liked you verse a little more maybe just cause your more expierecnced.Rhyme sheme was great had some good multis in there, some were kinve foced but not noticible, nothing else i can really say you both did great !!!
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