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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
From: ATL..still reppin' NYC |
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not bad... there were some grammatikal errors though.... for example:
Becuase one day he called my name,...At the start of pray
So I paused and wait, And listen as his thoughts explained
pray shoulda been prayer... but ya needed sum'n to rhyme with the next line
then ya had paused and wait both should be in the past tense to make more sense of it... listen should have also been past tense....
there were a few more but they were all small things like the one listed above so no need to dwell on it... decent drop overall... multies splattered here and there... decent concept.... work on them lil things to perfect it
7.5/10
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