Axel-Loved your imagery in your verse. Decent emotion Loved it. Upp on vocab, structure is nice. THe fllow is good.

Bone Collector- I liked the imagery, the emotion was lacking in your verse. Don't stretch cha lines that much, good flow though, your verse was more of a "Story" verse which is cool, good.

This was a good callab, axel is the best aspect in this collab in my opinion just tooked over with it's imagery and the emotion. Bone Collector nice imagery keep dropping.

Plz Leave feed on my newest om called "SunSet In Heaven"....

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