Thread: one mic & lyrical mage- gettin yo' speaker blastin'
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Old 07-22-05, 03:13 PM   #10
Tha Q.
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one mic...ur flow is good...and ur rhyme scheme is stock = good...but, throw a few twists in there every now and then


2nd cat...not bad...but ur verse lacked a clear direction and some complecity with rhyming...add some multi syllables


not bad

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