Voted For: Tweety

good battle here....

black magik: i liked how u flipped the concept about things in real life and shit like tgat, emotion was good, vocab was decent... flow was on point all the wayu through... they enjoyment was nice basically itket me interested all the way through and had a decent story line to it... good job man


tweety: nice again, different kind of concept here, you went deeper into your piece and had a better story to it,. the vocab was better aswell... flow was on point..... imagaination was better than blacks.... overall i just thought that your piece stood out more and was better to read.


good job to both but imma give this to tweety becuz she went deeper into the topic, and showed more emotion and imagination...

v/ tweety

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