heres what i think...

Fuck you and ya small weener, my raps prove that I'm meaner
N' ya school never took ya on fieldtrips, so i'm taking ya to the cleaners
nice opener, but you could get it fit fit into the concept of cleaners more if u get me?
Better spend time on concepts or I'll slash ya eye sockets
But if ya have a brain dump, world pollution will skyrocket
^^ lol i liekd this bar, hit him hard
Winning? You can't cop it, this joke will say what the worst is
What has no beginning, middle, or end? A doughnut and quote's verses
lol, original... like it
Kid's fillin' with curses, he's a sick fuck and not one to scare
Fag only let the cat outta the bag to kidnap a little girl in there
lmao, nice concept and u flipped the phrase good
You n' wackness compare, seems tokens in arcades need order
N' if your the alien attack champ...
...............why are so many mexicans crossin' the border
lol, anuva original concept flipped nicely
Ya fucking wack, yeah I said it, ya dropped ass n' you'll regret it
Bitch, I could make a monkey out of you, but I don't wanna take the credit
i dont really get this one
N' ho ya better go n' roam or I'll be clippin' ya dome
But dawg if ya cry wolf, remember ya girl will run home
lol simple but effective
N' That's how it goes, you say peaceful? I think ya bluffin
In fact i know ya like war, cuz ya good for ABSOLUTELY nothing
nice punch here..... getting back on track
Clown you ain't good for something, not even a good rhyme scheme
N' ya fall's been in the brewers so long, it'd bankrupt the team
not really feelni this, dno y tho somethnig missing
You suck it would seem, and Kap and Born already made it clear
And I quote
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Originally Posted by Born To Kill
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... so why the fuck you still here?
decent closure, nice punch

ight there was some real nice punches in there and a couople that didnt make sense or i wasnt feeling, but other than that i would think you could take the battle with that verse i liked it alot good job man

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