Originally Posted by DaTrusHurtz

I've never read any of the KLL battles and don't vote there cause I'm not in the league and surely anyone I voted against would complain. Here's some feedback though. Keep in mind I'm a tough grader cause I don't believe in telling someone a bar is dope unless it's truely dope.

almost a day for that? to be honest i was expecting more,
punches original? naa becuz we've heard em all before,
This is okay, but it's kinda basic, no wit to it
yet on your music............. you keep failing to be heard,
u got writers block the way u recycled off fuxjustaword,
Good concept, but coulda been executed better. I woulda been more like this "Kid recycles so much from fuxjustaword, he's helpin wit the environment" Ya know, add wit to it, don't just state it
i aint used to dealin wit throwbacks, already been torn,
it's like an x rated shop the way im leaving him pawned,
This is what i call a threat punch. Kinda creative I guess, but I don't think it's harsh
diss my accent, hail the queen, but you can't spoil me,
but ill jack this so called king and murk him wit royalty,
Same thing as above... cool concept, but just a statement/threat... no punch to it. A punch woulda been more like "N' when he jacks a king is the ONLY time he's royalty"
you hot? faggot u cant get ya voice heard on the speakers,
in fact you so cold, people fail to see you with heat seakers,
heat/cold stuff is kinda played

There ya go man