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Live double cats give me trouble annoy my styles with
Toys and smiles but don’t bother to call talked over swift
With my father and all so I feel larger and tall owning a gift
WTF street shoot outs, selling too much rifles which leads to
Such trifles as drive bys hope this kind of jive dies god we need you
If you take money then you’re a fake dummy if you don’t payback
Stay whack looking for a hand out all understand what you about just a stray act