Voted For: will a peer

hahaha.. this was a okay battle..

kids wack tried 2 get in ue and failed now hes tryin 2 bounce back
so he pms me tryin to buy cs for rv cash wall street stats are fallin fast

good line

45 minutes wasnt long enough for 5 bars watch me have to reset this again
lol just waistin time but hurry up im not reseting it again cause u dont no how to check in

not a good dis but funny lol..

flow was okay.. lil too long.. not wut u would do in a real battle like live wise.. but yeah.. your punclines were okay.. only had a good ones..

loyalty..
Like An Arm Amputees Fight...Punches.... You Can't Bring
You Won't Make It In Rap...You Got Better Chances Going Camping

didnt make sence???

Crime Syndicate? Only Time You Was A Felon Is On True Crime
Your Punches Wouldn't Conncet To Two Lines If It Was Glue Lines

ur best line but.. was an okay line..

basiclly only thing u had better was structure and flow... next time work on better punches man.. thats all n try to do better personals

vote: will

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