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Old 07-31-05, 07:20 PM   #12
MADDRAPPER
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ok kid this is not rap at all it don't rhyme enough plus no attitude whatsoever this is wrote in third person in order to get attitude you must write in first person like this son now listen up

I step strong but like furniture i get slept on collide with rap odd and have to divide crap with my rod
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