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07-31-05, 01:59 PM
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My Great Dividing Rod
IP: 3240 794D
My great dividing rod must have been taken from the Garden of Eden,
It is not seeing in believing, but you have to be believing to be seeing. And you have to get me really drunk, and on the dance floor with disco funk. Nodding my head to some real dope music, screw that Cisco punk. My funky hand points diagonally down, and then points diagonally up. My other damn disco hand squeezing the half-empty plastic cup. And I'll do the moonwalk down the floor, tip my hat and dip my whore, and I go to whoever my Great Dividing Rod points to, the tool from lore. I'll do the windmill and invent a move called the windowsill, get slammed shut, do that great dividing rod strut, wiggle that fat on your chubby butt. I'll see some hot tamales at the bar, eat them, and dance like I'm on fire. You think I'm some kind of liar? Wait until Watergate Scandal transpires. Never listen to any type of country song, discos the only way to go. Stick your hands behind your back and see how long you can stay low. Because that's a thing you need when you're running from the damn cops, like having +4 in jumping skill, so you have the sweet ability to fence hop. And I'll follow my great dividing rod, to whatever woman is drinking liquer, and i'll pull that grand old ancient branch from my pants and literally stick her.  Last edited by Daemon : 08-01-05 at 12:22 AM. |
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07-31-05, 02:46 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
o_o It's supposed to be Divining. Word.
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07-31-05, 03:03 PM
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 1CA5 73AB
LMFAO You are an idiot.
This was dope tho, I'm still laughing at its wonderfulness  Never listen to any type of country song, discos the only way to go. Stick your hands behind your back and see how long you can stay low. Because that's a thing you need when you're running from the damn cops, like having +4 in jumping skill, so you have the sweet ability to fence hop. And I'll follow my great dividing rod, to whatever woman is drinking liquer, and i'll pull that grand old ancient branch from my pants and literally stick her. ^^ Best verse... Word biotch
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07-31-05, 03:42 PM
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IP: 48B2 04C6
First thing I thought of from the title was "Grocery stick?"
But this was good, maybe I'll read it later. And post feedback..
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07-31-05, 03:44 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
It was so good, I did a moonwalk and accidentally impaled myself on a banana.
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07-31-05, 03:47 PM
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IP: 48B2 04C6
lol kein what ever happened to Spilled Inc.? i ditched my other name cause it was bullshit, check my om "dissapearing clouds" and ill get back to this one cause im leaving soon.
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07-31-05, 03:50 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
^ Who're you again? XD Gongshow? My penis? Kin?
Word, I'll check it. And Spilled Inc. just never went anywhere, because I was just too damn dope. |
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07-31-05, 06:29 PM
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Drop a link or this will be closed
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07-31-05, 06:59 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
yeah clos this for being a pussy i dropped a rhyme and he to weak to drop one on me just a phony pussy hole nigga
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07-31-05, 07:01 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
^ Madd, what in the fuck are you talking about? In case you don't know I don't spend all my time on rapverse, it's called going outside for a break once in a while, and plus, I'm not the fucking one who gets all bitchy and writes weak ass disses that don't make sense when someone criticizes him. I'll get a link in a second.
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07-31-05, 07:03 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
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07-31-05, 07:20 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
ok kid this is not rap at all it don't rhyme enough plus no attitude whatsoever this is wrote in third person in order to get attitude you must write in first person like this son now listen up
I step strong but like furniture i get slept on collide with rap odd and have to divide crap with my rod |
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07-31-05, 07:46 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
Not everyone fucking needs to do an attitude, and it's not even a fucking rap, it's a humor poem, you damn tool. Man, it's funny that you think multis and attitude make a rapper, and it's even funnier you're getting banned soon. And not all raps are written in third person, full. You don't always say 'maddrapper this and maddrapper that'. If you do, you'll sound fucking stupid as hell --- well, more so.
... by the way, I appreciate the feed.  |
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07-31-05, 08:00 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
I gave you an example of where you suppose to be now yall say i'm whack now look at yourself for a change no rapper using that hey buddy rap is rhymje with attitude i think if you try you can do it but right now you are way behind the eight ball why talk about banning? should be talking about expanding feel me
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07-31-05, 10:11 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
You're so fucking stupid. This site is not all about rap text, you know, you fucking retard. You're calling me wack when I mess around, but you're always trying to front an attitude and using shit that doesn't make sense. Admittedly, your verses are okay, but they'd be a lot fucking better if
1. you didn't force multis. 2. you took the time to make one good one instead of seven hardly mediocre ones. 3. don't drop verses on other people's threads. Because really, a lot of people are getting pissed off because you're not following the rules and you're dropping in their stuff. Don't go around calling everything on here rap, because some of it is actually poetry or topicals. Like I've said, I tell stories in what I do, and don't try and front with some bullshit hood stuff that hardly anyone on rapverse has ever experienced. You may be able to understand your shit, but you're vague as fuck and not understandable when you're saying all this stupid shit that doesn't make sense. ^ And that's the type of feedback you should leave. Seriously, madd, getting yourself banned by breaking the rules won't get you to elevate. You seriously want to be a rap king? Work for it... as far as I can see, you haven't done really anything but post the same stuff, and got hated on by a lot of people so you could never get any real constructive criticism. Just please follow the rules unless you wanted to have wasted all your posts here on nothing. That's like having 100-0 as a record and then biting some mediocre line to get banned...just fucking wack. |
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