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Old 08-01-05, 12:42 AM   #9
Ca'lam
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beats coo i like it..


verse 1 - flow is good.. rhyme scheme nice.. gangsta sheme bleh... no tmy style..

chorus - strait..

verse 2 - ehh more gun play.. its aight..

chorus - strait again..

verse 3 - god damn sun.. moooore gunplay.. i aint feelin it son..


i mean.. songs strait.. but if you talka bout lyrical shit and u include the word :"lyrical" be original na'mean ?.. you cant claim u illand shit with no proof.. self glorification is gettin played bruv.. decent track tho
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