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IP:
i was feelin this one but i do got some advice...
but first ill state the good points of this rhyme...
i liked the flow.. kept the rhyme movin real nice...
i like the vocab.. it was better in some spots tho...
it could have used some multies nd such as atticus said...
and more of a well stated topic to bring the whole rhyme together...
overall id have to give it a 6.5/10.. no hate just needs some elevation...
peace.1
- TS1
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