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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP:
this was pretty good, changed topics in the middle of the verse so that kinda took away from it, the second part was emotional as they stated, structure was ok but needs a lil work, flow was good, vocab was decent, keep it up man
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i come from a time when you earned respect,
for your rhyme and the way you made words connect,
not the money that you made or the girls you sexed,
a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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