Hmmm...decent concept and topic here....Vocab was aight, wasnt really seein too much...Structure was good n all easy to read n shit like that...Could use better wordplay and words...And pretty much i would elevate alot manye...Also Make it longer for now on...overall- 4/10...Its cool dont worry hopefully you'll elevate and get better n all that...

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