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Old 08-02-05, 10:18 PM   #15
Rile1
The Emcee Shogun
 
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Voted For: GêÑ触§

Problem ur structure and flow sucked major ass and really ur punches were newbish, try not to talk about gay, sex, moms, or guns man u need to be creative, read some battle to fix ur structure..Gen u messed up ur structure in the middle but u had good punches which gave u the win...V/Gen for better punches and structure
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