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Old 08-03-05, 12:41 PM   #17
snipes
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u had a good flow and good imagination
yo punches we're str8 and unstandable

yo weak line was
yo' umbrella can't save u as rhymes rain down like a raging storm

yo dopest lines was
i stop yo' 'embryonic' rhymes from maturing like an abortion
man, whoever said i was this good wasn't blowing shit out of proportion!

dat was strong and bold
but dont extend yo lines ta far
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